Wednesday, June 9, 2010

Replacing You

i asked you to leave
i didn't want you to stay
but got disappointed all the same
when i saw you walk away

I've been searching for you since
in every friend and foe
in every person i meet
in everyone i know

they see me all happy outside
I've moved on, they say
i would have, for real too
but try as i may...

i cried i laughed, i broke my heart
but one thing i couldn't do
was find the one person in life
who could've replaced you

4 comments:

Dreamcatcher said...

repercussions of break up.....nicely ptrayed...simple yet deep...totally does justice to the turmoil of a broken heart....very well written...keep it up..:)

Beyond said...

Call back.. love always stays. Never think that it's too late.

Anonymous said...

even finding that irreplaceable one is one glad thing! but it makes us vulnerable forever.
No replacement....total break down.....
try to pretend they dont care...but actually they dont care about anything else as much as they care about this one irreplaceable spare part of their life!
well aimed writing as always!
:)

Anonymous said...

'i asked you to leave
i didn't want you to stay
but got disappointed all the same
when i saw you walk away'

*Typical girl thingy!!
Pardon the humor but it vexes me when people say something, while meaning something else.
Gal!! nobody is antaryaami :)